Nia’s First Short Stories

Recently, I was led back to humble writing beginnings: my first short stories that I created and had my aunt type for me when I was four. These have been requested before and I’m finally getting around to it. I honestly hope you guys enjoy these as much as I did.

 

The Witch And The Princess

There once was a witch who was very mean.

One day the bravest princess mother came out and fight that mean bad witch to another palace.

So, then she told her daughter and her husband to come out because the witch wouldn’t come over any more because she probably went to another village. They smiled. Then they got to take care of their beautiful coins. Because they were so shiny, they didn’t even want that witch to get them. They didn’t want the witch to get any of their precious gold. They had lots of jewelry that they wanted to keep from that mean old witch.

So that witch decided she wanted to go to another planet that nobody saw before. Then she got to do all the mean things she wanted because then the queen dropped her out of her hand and she fell down a cliff and fell in the other planet.

And so she decided to come back up, but she didn’t know the way back up into the planet. She tried and tried and tried, and fell down and bumped her head. And everybody was so happy so they can do all the stuff they wanted again.

THE END

 

The Man Which Had a Silly Dog

Once upon a time, there was a man who had a silly dog which liked to play in the mud with pigs.

As they went to the farm one day, the pigs were gone. So the dog and the man wanted to meet some new pigs, but they didn’t know another farm. One day the bravest person came and told them where the other farm was. They knew there was another farm but they didn’t know how far away from their house it was.

Then the bravest person told them where the other farm was. No matter how hard the dog ruffed, he didn’t know what to do. The dog ruffed a little louder and the pigs heard him. He thought his pigs were dead. He thought he was never going to see them again. But he was.

Then a cat came to the farm and played with the dog since the pigs were at the other farm sleeping.

Because they were tired of running and playing with the dog, they ran off. And then they wanted to wake up and come and see the dog. So they went up to the man and the dog’s farm.

THE END

 

Needless to say, I wasn’t disappointed: the grammar and the characters are hilarious. If anyone knows what’s going on in the second one, please let me know! Thank you.

Side note: I can’t wait to get back to posting regularly (I’m almost done with my college applications!).

Love always, Nia Shalise

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